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2/7/10: Obama Fails at Storytelling

This is a few days late, but it's a duesy!

President Obama attempted to wow an audience chock full of die-hard supporters by recounting an anecdote about a campaign supporter who recently lost her battle with cancer. The video below begins with the anecdote. Take a look:



This is an epic failure. Here's why:
  1. The overriding problem with the anecdote is the continued theme of Ego-Terrorism. This man's ego is simply off the charts, as pointed out by Byron York:

    Many observers have noted that the president often seems extraordinarily self-referential. It's all about him, they say. But even those critics might be a little taken aback by the "buried in an Obama t-shirt" remark. Is it really that much about him?
  2. He can't remember the woman's name. Again, this is pure Ego-Terrorism - this woman's name isn't important. What IS important is that she supported HIM.
  3. The president is so disconnected from reality that he can't even deliver a line without awkward laughter. Nobody could figure out if the "buried in an Obama T-shirt" comment was a joke because, well, it was a bizarre attempt to connect Obama's grand self-image to the struggles of an average citizen. Keep in mind, the audience was stacked with Obama supporters and his speech was laid out before him on a teleprompter. Even in that kind of protected environment, he STILL fails to connect with his audience.
  4. As Tom Macguire of JustOneMinute points out, the unnamed woman had health insurance.
  5. On a slightly more "technical" note, the woman - whose name was Melanie Shouse, in case YOU, unlike the president, care about such details - was cremated, not buried. She was, however, wearing an Obama T-shirt. So he got one detail correct - not surprisingly, it was a detail concerning his own image.

This latest failure is painfully reminiscent of Obama's State of the Union address, when Congress laughed at the president after his "spending freeze" comment.